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Literature Text
I am waking in a meadow
The sun rising over the trees
I miss the night when there where no shadows
Only the moon through the leaves
But night is gone and I must go
From this place that shelters me
I await the night when once again
I may escape from reality
The sun's cruel rays illuminate all
The lies that I have spoken
Only at night can I truly hide
From the truth - I am broken
The sun rising over the trees
I miss the night when there where no shadows
Only the moon through the leaves
But night is gone and I must go
From this place that shelters me
I await the night when once again
I may escape from reality
The sun's cruel rays illuminate all
The lies that I have spoken
Only at night can I truly hide
From the truth - I am broken
![[f2u] anthro base](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/97d1277d-b5f5-45de-8ec7-da72a861f301/dchyzdf-e215080c-b2b5-4b35-af58-8e28701ed003.png/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_0,y_37,scl_0.95336787564767/_f2u__anthro_base_by_binasproutt_dchyzdf-92s-2x.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MzQ5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOTdkMTI3N2QtYjVmNS00NWRlLThlYzctZGE3MmE4NjFmMzAxXC9kY2h5emRmLWUyMTUwODBjLWIyYjUtNGIzNS1hZjU4LThlMjg3MDFlZDAwMy5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTkzIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.oJol672kqL7PM_TXzQp73_yPSdsQvXbNIuzTqkuEdpI)
![[f2u] anthro base](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/97d1277d-b5f5-45de-8ec7-da72a861f301/dchyzdf-e215080c-b2b5-4b35-af58-8e28701ed003.png/v1/crop/w_92,h_92,x_0,y_19,scl_0.47668393782383/_f2u__anthro_base_by_binasproutt_dchyzdf-92s.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MzQ5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOTdkMTI3N2QtYjVmNS00NWRlLThlYzctZGE3MmE4NjFmMzAxXC9kY2h5emRmLWUyMTUwODBjLWIyYjUtNGIzNS1hZjU4LThlMjg3MDFlZDAwMy5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9MTkzIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.oJol672kqL7PM_TXzQp73_yPSdsQvXbNIuzTqkuEdpI)
I really like this poem. It took alot of guts for me to start submitting my work. I hope you like it! Let me know what you think, please.
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You have a really good grasp of rhyming. It's nice to read. The best way I can describe it is like reading the wake created by a boat, like an even bumping tempo. If that makes sense at all x.x